Published April 23, 2008
True friend
Elegant and beautiful
Random but still makes sense
Entertaining, makes me laugh
Still my little girly
Always.
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Nice. By the way, thanks for critiquing my poem.
"Girly." That's cute. The whole poem is so sweet. The one problem I see is that I don't think it has a definite rhyme scheme. Right now the rhyme scheme is all over the place. Work on that, and it will be pretty good.
Good luck with your writing!
~Jamie